School: Bolton High School
Town: Bolton
Slug: "Blood Drive "
Status: Broadcast
Length: 50

DELIVERY: Good. Great stand up.

INTERVIEWS: Nice sound bite from the coordinator. Shot was a little dark.

ORIGINALITY: Great story idea

WRITING: Good but opening could have been stronger. Could have tightened up the opening with the reason blood is needed. Make sure the script matches the video. You say the scene is serene but it wasn't a peaceful scene almost looked like a makeshift treatment center for a tragedy until you explain it is a blood drive. The rest of the story was very focused and effective. Nice use of statistics.

VIDEO: Good. The second shot at the beginning seemed to move around without purpose.

AUDIO: Good. Consistant levels.

EDITING: Nice job. Work on using an establishing shot of the interviewee. Show us the person when you are introducing them.

OVERALL: Very good!

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Date posted: April 20, 2007
School: Bolton High School
Town: Bolton
Slug: "Indoor Motocross "
Status: Broadcast