What should the readers think when they read this article? Why should the school's reputation be on the line? When a parent decides a school for their child, what will they think when it comes to Mark Keppel High School?
We admit that these crimes are wrong and must be stopped, but in our opinion, the article was a bit exaggerated. You make it seem as if the Monterey Park and Alhambra area is not a safe place to be anymore.
Maybe the article should not only inform the people, but also persuade them to find a solution.
(and other students)